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#1 Daniel Arriola

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Posted 08 January 2016 - 11:28 AM

I'm into commercial photography (as a hobby), so yesterday I decided to take some random shots of some bottles and cigars found at home. Since I don't have any lighting equipment, I used desk lamps and a construction light. Tried to match them with CTOs though. I didn't fill any glasses because I was not willing to drink or throwing them away, and since they're only tests, it doesn't really matter. Please give me feedback on lighting, setups, and post, as I would really like to get a job as a commercial photographer. Thank you in advance.

 

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#2 Bill DiPietra

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Posted 08 January 2016 - 11:45 AM

Very nice work!


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#3 Raymond Popa

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Posted 09 January 2016 - 04:29 PM

Looks dramatic/classy. Nice!


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