TOLERANCE - short dark-comedy/action movie
Posted 14 November 2005 - 06:16 PM
Please let me know what you think! Thank you!
Posted 14 November 2005 - 09:07 PM
This is one reason why your profile angles look the best for that night scene, because at least most of his face is in shadow.
Generally the moonlight is too bright to be realistic.
I liked the POV shot of the flashlight beam hitting the trees, which had a nice balance with the moonlight.
The first shot of the flashback floating down the water looking at the shore is great -- I think I'll steal it someday! I also liked the second shot that swings 180 degrees around the guy and then pulls back, and the tracking shots of the chase. Not so fond of the music and of course, your dialogue mixing needs work.
Posted 15 November 2005 - 01:05 AM
The move around the guy on the shore is nice, almost don't notice it- if David didn't mention it.
Edited by CMPhern, 15 November 2005 - 01:08 AM.