Posted 11 April 2006 - 11:53 AM
here's my honest opinion....
positives: I think the location was good. You had some really well done
shots from certain angles and what not. The imagery with the girl was
very nice! Wide angle shot of band was very cool, cool...should've done
more of it! Obviously took the attention and time to set the scenes with
the girl and band..great preparation man'!
negatives: The two atmospheres (band location/the bed with girl and stuff)
didn't blend with each other at all, its like there were two completely different
stories. I couldn't define any story to be honest...and thats important with
a genre like this where you cant hear any words. Some of the video wasn't
sinked up with the song very well, like the drummer..which is important to make it
look professional. I applaud your efforts and decent job on lighting, but
your story MUST BE TOLD!...OR at least your imagery HAS TO MIX WELL!
your short trailer though........is FANTASTIC!!!!!
great imagery and creativity...weird, but intriguing.