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#1 seth christian

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Posted 21 April 2006 - 08:16 PM

please try to ignore the compressed delivery from Revver.com

Any critiques would be great!





http://revver.com/video/19924/
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#2 John Holland

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Posted 26 April 2006 - 09:50 AM

please try to ignore the compressed delivery from Revver.com

Any critiques would be great!
http://revver.com/video/19924/

sorry .but just rubbish in all departments . john holland .
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#3 seth christian

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Posted 28 April 2006 - 03:09 AM

sorry .but just rubbish in all departments . john holland .


what does that mean exactly???
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#4 Stephen Williams

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Posted 28 April 2006 - 03:43 AM

what does that mean exactly???


Hi,

I don't think John will be booking you for any 2nd unit he needs!

Stephen
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#5 LondonFilmMan

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Posted 29 April 2006 - 03:37 AM

One tries to imagine if that could be broadcasted... Frankly, I have my doubts. Might they ask you about its PC? I think so eh? It was also a bit immature.
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#6 Chris_Burket

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Posted 29 April 2006 - 04:03 AM

Wow, a lot of harsh words. I'm guessing this was a spec commercial? I can see your intent, the idea is kind of interesting, but could have been more developed. Possibly something added in that frustrated this guy even more with his browser? For instance, if he was obviously sick (with a cold or something) and was trying to DL a recipe for chicken soup.... I think you could have done more with the idea than a guy going nuts about his browser. The set was interesting, but the lighting could have been much better. It seemed very flat, colorless. I have done some DP work, but very little so I may not be the best to critique lighting or give suggestions in that department...

Overall, interesting work, keep writing and shooting.
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