Jump to content


Photo

input please!!...commercial I did.


  • Please log in to reply
5 replies to this topic

#1 seth christian

seth christian
  • Basic Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 189 posts
  • Director
  • Nashville, TN. USA

Posted 21 April 2006 - 08:16 PM

please try to ignore the compressed delivery from Revver.com

Any critiques would be great!





http://revver.com/video/19924/
  • 0

#2 John Holland

John Holland
  • Basic Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 2273 posts
  • Cinematographer
  • London England

Posted 26 April 2006 - 09:50 AM

please try to ignore the compressed delivery from Revver.com

Any critiques would be great!
http://revver.com/video/19924/

sorry .but just rubbish in all departments . john holland .
  • 0

#3 seth christian

seth christian
  • Basic Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 189 posts
  • Director
  • Nashville, TN. USA

Posted 28 April 2006 - 03:09 AM

sorry .but just rubbish in all departments . john holland .


what does that mean exactly???
  • 0

#4 Stephen Williams

Stephen Williams
  • Sustaining Members
  • 4708 posts
  • Cinematographer
  • Europe

Posted 28 April 2006 - 03:43 AM

what does that mean exactly???


Hi,

I don't think John will be booking you for any 2nd unit he needs!

Stephen
  • 0

#5 LondonFilmMan

LondonFilmMan
  • Guests

Posted 29 April 2006 - 03:37 AM

One tries to imagine if that could be broadcasted... Frankly, I have my doubts. Might they ask you about its PC? I think so eh? It was also a bit immature.
  • 0

#6 Chris_Burket

Chris_Burket
  • Basic Members
  • PipPip
  • 77 posts
  • Other

Posted 29 April 2006 - 04:03 AM

Wow, a lot of harsh words. I'm guessing this was a spec commercial? I can see your intent, the idea is kind of interesting, but could have been more developed. Possibly something added in that frustrated this guy even more with his browser? For instance, if he was obviously sick (with a cold or something) and was trying to DL a recipe for chicken soup.... I think you could have done more with the idea than a guy going nuts about his browser. The set was interesting, but the lighting could have been much better. It seemed very flat, colorless. I have done some DP work, but very little so I may not be the best to critique lighting or give suggestions in that department...

Overall, interesting work, keep writing and shooting.
  • 0


Aerial Filmworks

Glidecam

Gamma Ray Digital Inc

Ritter Battery

Broadcast Solutions Inc

Rig Wheels Passport

FJS International, LLC

Visual Products

Wooden Camera

Willys Widgets

rebotnix Technologies

New Pro Video - New and Used Equipment

Media Blackout - Custom Cables and AKS

The Slider

Technodolly

CineLab

Paralinx LLC

Abel Cine

Metropolis Post

CineTape

Tai Audio

Gamma Ray Digital Inc

The Slider

CineTape

FJS International, LLC

Tai Audio

Abel Cine

Rig Wheels Passport

Ritter Battery

Paralinx LLC

Technodolly

Visual Products

Media Blackout - Custom Cables and AKS

Glidecam

Metropolis Post

CineLab

Broadcast Solutions Inc

Aerial Filmworks

Willys Widgets

rebotnix Technologies

New Pro Video - New and Used Equipment

Wooden Camera