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#1 jtp22

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Posted 08 June 2006 - 06:34 PM

New Music Video form a local female artist. Really meant to showcase appearance and voice.
Sort of a "Head Shot" Music video for promotion.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated

http://web.mac.com/j...9A9B72D306.html
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#2 Rolfe Klement

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Posted 09 June 2006 - 03:15 AM

The Close Up shots look very good for a DVX100.
I would have pushed the performance aspect - she is a good singer and her personailty comes across well
I might even have taken a risk and done a single take shot all in close up
Great song!

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#3 gordon liron

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Posted 10 June 2006 - 07:40 PM

New Music Video form a local female artist. Really meant to showcase appearance and voice.
Sort of a "Head Shot" Music video for promotion.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated

http://web.mac.com/j...9A9B72D306.html



The one comment I would make is you have a scene where you talent seems to be walking down a dirt path. You later cut back to this scene a couple of times and the camera is locked. In this frame I see the talent in the foreground and a big pile of dirt in the back. Not very appealing. Try cheating around a bad frame in the future.
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#4 seth christian

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Posted 20 June 2006 - 10:02 PM

I've gotta be honest man!.................

imagery was REAALLLYYY bad, I thought it looked
like a cheezy soap opera.

some shots couldve flown..like the one by the window with her
looking out, but move the camera around to see out the window
or something, everything is so tripoddy!

good luck on your next endeavor!
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