A trailer for a film I made
Posted 15 June 2006 - 01:16 AM
Posted 15 June 2006 - 01:55 AM
Some of the shots are good - the lighting and the framing are nice - some of the shots seem a tad soft.
The narration mic is popping quite a bit in the voice over.
The foley on the soft shoe is a bit out of place.
The music feels a little heavy for the trailer but in the context of the movie it might work.
The acting doesn't seem to bad.
Posted 15 June 2006 - 01:55 PM
The clicking heels sound over the shot of sneakers is pretty bad. It really jumped out at me immediately. You should get rid of that.
I like your composition in most of the shots. Very interesting. Except for my suggestions above, (which I think can be fixed) I think you've done a nice job. Keep shooting!
Which camera did you shoot on?
Please change your screen name to your real name so we know who we're talking to.
Posted 15 June 2006 - 02:44 PM
One thing to keep in mind which I'm sure you're well aware of, is that youtube especially i've found, takes down the quality of these videos greatly, I was wondering if there's any other place that could host them and would get a better compression rate.
Oops, I forgot to mention, I used two cameras for this film. I used a Sony DSR 250 for most of it, and a Canon GL2 for the beginning. Both were the best cameras I've worked with so far, and the Sony let me do all of those night shots with out too much trouble.