No Budget, No crew short film win a Shanghai Festival
Posted 01 September 2006 - 03:56 AM
I'm Director in the videogame industry and my first short with real person (and not 3d avatars) won a hort film contest at Shanghai. Any comments are very welcome.
You can find my movie in here: http://www.jmtari.com
Posted 04 September 2006 - 06:33 AM
i works good.
do you work in china now?
Posted 05 September 2006 - 02:49 PM
1. I would of gone with "Jean-Michel;" instead of "Michelle". In the English language this comes across better. Was this a Chinese, American or French production?
2. The lighting. Hmmm.....would household lights of worked?
3. The story, was rather unoriginal. E.g. cue ascending helicopter.
4. Dialogue was mostly inaudible and what I heard I didn't like.
On the positive side, for such a budget, the arrangement of shots and the editing of them was not too bad.
Posted 14 September 2006 - 11:42 AM
I think you should re-examine your storyline, a guy with a briefcase handcuffed to him, a gun with suddenly live ammo, and no idea what is happening, and then reimagine where the story goes from there...
Posted 14 September 2006 - 07:31 PM