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#1 Jean-michel Tari

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Posted 01 September 2006 - 03:56 AM

Hello all,

I'm Director in the videogame industry and my first short with real person (and not 3d avatars) won a hort film contest at Shanghai. Any comments are very welcome.

You can find my movie in here: http://www.jmtari.com

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#2 Delorme Jean-Marie

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Posted 04 September 2006 - 06:33 AM

so ! when do you start with a crew??? and a more "personal" script?
i works good.
do you work in china now?
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#3 LondonFilmMan

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Posted 05 September 2006 - 02:49 PM

Jean-michel Tari:

1. I would of gone with "Jean-Michel;" instead of "Michelle". In the English language this comes across better. Was this a Chinese, American or French production?

2. The lighting. Hmmm.....would household lights of worked?

3. The story, was rather unoriginal. E.g. cue ascending helicopter.

4. Dialogue was mostly inaudible and what I heard I didn't like.

On the positive side, for such a budget, the arrangement of shots and the editing of them was not too bad.

Good luck.
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#4 Alex Ellerman

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 11:42 AM

i liked the idea - particularly, everything up until the helicopter arrived, then logic went on vacation...

I think you should re-examine your storyline, a guy with a briefcase handcuffed to him, a gun with suddenly live ammo, and no idea what is happening, and then reimagine where the story goes from there...

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#5 Terrence L Daniels

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 07:31 PM

isn't that the purpose of a dream...kinda chaotic and stuff just doesn't make sense???
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