Posted 01 September 2006 - 01:13 PM
Would appreciate your feedback.
Posted 01 September 2006 - 01:38 PM
I thought you had some pretty shots and I like the parallels and contrasts you draw between nature and man-made engineering.
That said, I felt like it would have benefitted from using a tri-pod. The graphics sprinkled in also seemed unnecessary. Let the pictures and the song make the point.
Thanks for sharing!
Posted 02 September 2006 - 07:26 AM
It's still creepy as hell!
I have an original DVD provided by The Artist, so neener to everyone.
Posted 07 January 2007 - 10:59 PM
But there was no creativity....all you were doing was taking shots of things outside and putting music over it. I wouldn't call that a Music Video.
Additionaly, some of the shots were sort of shaky at points.
Over-all though, nice and relaxing....just nothing new
Posted 08 January 2007 - 12:47 AM
Posted 08 January 2007 - 09:06 AM
means a lot to me!..
- Perhaps you could have had a tripod on the beach scene inparticular, and held longer on a few shots here and there, but it's a personal thing with the type of film you've made. Like David I do think it could have looked particularly good on 8mm... The one thing I didn't like was the occasional lyric on screen - I just didn't feel you needed it, the images/cut worked for me on their own merit. It depends on what you want to do with the film but dv or not, you can tell you're a film-maker with an eye for another angle...
- nb - It's refreshing to see a music video with soul and intelligence. Let's face it: commercial pop promos are generally crap and make up for lack of content/meaning with fast cuts and pointlessly moving camera.
Posted 08 January 2007 - 09:33 PM