Feedback on First Short Film - Thanks!
Posted 16 September 2006 - 02:52 AM
Also if any one is interested I do not have a site up yet for the video work but you can see my illustration and still photography at http://www.pwlawrence.com/
Posted 16 September 2006 - 03:11 AM
The Images are very nice though!
Posted 16 September 2006 - 03:34 AM
As for the object it is to show the power of God etc. But really thats not so much what I wanted feedback on. Mainly becouse it comes down to this. If you area Christian more than likely you will go wow I like that and if you are an athiest you will go wow what terrible propaganda. But both can give me an idea if the editing and look are ok:)
Edited by Patrick Lawrence, 16 September 2006 - 03:38 AM.
Posted 17 September 2006 - 12:00 PM
Posted 17 September 2006 - 12:29 PM
I liked it, the editting was pretty good and went well with the music, I don't know if it was just the you tube jumpiness but some of the cuts seemed a bit jumpy. If you use a really small dissolve, like one frame then it make a subliminal effect that makes the cuts blend together better, while still seeming like a cut.