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#1 Greg Moulton

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Posted 28 September 2006 - 04:52 PM

The spot is almost locked. We have two versions, would welcome some feedback on them, which version you think is stronger. Constructive criticism is welcome as we haven't locked picture yet, so any great ideas or things we missed would be incorporated.

Thanks.

Here's version 6: http://www.dontpanik.../Monster_v6.mov

Here's version 7. [I asked for some of these changes; now I'm not so sure I should have opened my mouth]: http://www.dontpanik.../Monster_v7.mov


FYI, I wrote and directed these. A local DP named Vincent Pascoe (lurks here but doesn't post) shot them, and an LA editor named Mark Panik cut them. I'll pass on any corresponding feedback to them.
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#2 Jonathan Bryant

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Posted 01 October 2006 - 10:00 PM

It made me giggle. I think the shadow of a fan in the window gave it that cheap office feel. Highlights were alittle on the hot side, was this HD? The last line could use a phone filter effect to make it more realistic. Overall a good spot IMHO.
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#3 Vincent Pascoe

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Posted 03 October 2006 - 08:16 AM

I do to post here! it was shot on 35mm 5218 500asa vison 2 stock.




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