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#1 Ckulakov

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Posted 12 November 2006 - 03:21 AM

Dear Filmmakers,

After watching my film in comparison to other indie films, I realized that I must totally reshoot the the first 1/3 in order to give it more PUNCH , i wanted to visually express the character and I new I needed more intimate or compelling compositions.

After a disappointing prom night, confused and sensitive young man with a passion for music comes home and escapes the dark world of superficial and purely sexual high school relationships through his musically motivated visions. Will his imagination free him and what is the reality that awaits him?




Please give me some feedback, I would really apprecaite a chance to learn what I must improve to be more successful in my delivery.


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#2 David Sweetman

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Posted 12 November 2006 - 03:34 AM

Nice, much stronger visuals, I like how you used shadow and contrast, I think that's important especially in black and white. And the dream sequence is awesome too.
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