A short film I made
Posted 30 November 2006 - 07:09 PM
Posted 01 December 2006 - 01:08 PM
Hey guys. I usually post a link to my short film here so I can get feedback. So far the feedback you guys give me is extremely motivating and very helpful. Here's another short film I made. Thanks for watching and leave a comment it you feel like it.
Very good!! I loved the angles you used.
Posted 01 December 2006 - 04:07 PM
On position 1:21 there is shadow on the wall from the camera, atleast it looks like it anyway. Be nice if there was some back light instead of a flat key light.
The title sequence seemed a bit strange, how it fades out into a static shot, and then the static shot starts moving. I would have probably faded to black, then created a white out into the moving shot.
And at position 5:30 you can see a light in the reflection of the window.
But it wasn't bad.
Edited by Daniel Ashley-Smith, 01 December 2006 - 04:10 PM.
Posted 01 December 2006 - 06:23 PM
Posted 03 December 2006 - 06:32 AM