I tried to do it in a typical format, but I don't think working on films applies very well.
I just decided to wing it and make a new one. I'm not sure how it should look so I'm looking for some advice. Not so much on the content, but on the presentation. I'll take anything I can get. Format, wording, structure. Whatever needs changing, addition, or outright removal, I'd love it hear it. And if the whole thing is just completely wrong, well, that's fine too.
I'm attaching it as a file. My personal info was changed for obvious reasons. But I'll gladly give it out if someone wants to hire me!