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#1 Terry Hsieh

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Posted 14 January 2007 - 10:22 PM

Hey all,

I was wondering if you'd like to give me some feedback about my script. I know it's not exactly in the proper form but I'll get it there once I finish a rewrite. Please don't steal it....i put a lot of work into writing and would hate it if some did.

Terry

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#2 Enrique Lombana

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Posted 11 July 2007 - 07:06 PM

Hi Terry,

I encourage you to learn the proper format screenplay. For a few reasons. One, it would be understandable. Two, it will at least professional before the person begins to read. Three, you can judge the pacing of the story much better. Four, people will take you seriously, people in the industry anyway.

I tried reading your story but there were too many speedbumps. Here is a link to a short I wrote with proper screenplay format. It's only 5 pages or so. http://www.geocities...ixe/getaway.pdf

All the best,
Hope this helps,

Enrique
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#3 James Steven Beverly

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Posted 12 July 2007 - 02:02 AM

Do a search here for free screen writing software, a few people listed the download sites somewhere on these forums recently. It'll help you a lot. B)
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#4 James Steven Beverly

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Posted 12 July 2007 - 02:02 AM

Check the heading Free screen writing software.

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