Rain scene from CineVera Pictures
Posted 04 July 2007 - 02:18 PM
Posted 06 July 2007 - 01:41 AM
Posted 06 July 2007 - 10:56 AM
And i agree with James next time get a better actress...
Edited by Xavier Plaza, 06 July 2007 - 10:57 AM.
Posted 06 July 2007 - 10:59 AM
Posted 07 July 2007 - 05:07 PM
I liked the close up shot of the guy, beautiful DOF, though the blue key light on him might be a tad too much. But it worked for me, and the rain playing off his face worked nicely. I didn't particularily find the change to slow motion relevant, and found it a little awkward being there. Could have worked without I think.
Generally VERY nice images, good mood, great atmosphere. Acting could have been better as other repliers mentioned. The music was also a tad too loud, had trouble hearing some of the dialogue, kind of drowned in the music..
Good visual work overall, very solid!
Posted 07 July 2007 - 10:54 PM
1) the first 2 shots don't much compositionally, separate they are pretty great, but it seems than together you don't need the first one, they are telling the same thing (is raining now)
2) This a personal thing I like more contrasty images, more sharp, and the colours more vibrant, but for what you have already I think is great.
I agree with other guys about the acting, I think the girl need it a better objective to slap the guy and to say her lines the same with the guys reactions, but whatever you have it already and the final product looks great
Posted 08 July 2007 - 11:16 PM
The filters you chose worked well and nothing stuck out as distracting in any of the shots. I really like the close up shot of the guy. Good job.
Posted 20 July 2007 - 01:14 PM
In fairness, I think she could have used some better material. Even coming in at the middle of the story, it's hard for me to imagine anyone delivering those lines in a way that would match the depth and intensity conveyed by every other element in the scene.
...get a better actress...