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#1 M Joel W

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 03:33 PM

I posted a few scenes of some tests at another forum and got some negative responses...but no help! Anyhow, I'm wondering what I can do to improve or what I'm missing since I think this is mostly pretty good work:

http://home.comcast....letman/test.mov

I appreciate the help. This movie has been in production for over a year so I want to get everything perfect for the last few scenes which I'm shooting later.

Thanks!
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#2 Josh Brokenbourgh

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 04:43 PM

Matthew,

Could you give me some background on the story? Who, what, where, when as usual- if you have a link to this info that works too. That's really the only way I can do a good crit. Let me know and I will spend some time on it. I could say: yeah the light and blocking look great- but if the context is off than not of that will make sense...
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#3 Ram Shani

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 10:43 PM

its hard to understand what the movie is about but i think the main problem here is the acting which is very bad

sorry:)
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