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#1 Andrew Gooi

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Posted 31 July 2007 - 11:37 PM

It's a short clip that I do every year for my country's independence day. Let me know what you think. I'm new to this forum and I'm all ears to your critique. Thanks!



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#2 Cristian Olariu

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Posted 01 August 2007 - 11:27 AM

Nice general feeling. Good pace.
Some of the shots could've used more lighting, like the one from down below as he is reading the card, you can't really see his face in it. Also, instead of a profile as he is reading the card I would've done a POV from the card.
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#3 Brant Collins

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Posted 02 August 2007 - 11:16 AM

Looks good. The pan from the driver to the card could have been smoother.
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