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"Conviction" - new short film from CineVera Pictures


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#1 Brian Posslenzny

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Posted 02 October 2007 - 04:55 PM

Check out our latest project: "Conviction." Shot in 12 hours at an abandoned warehouse in downtown Grand Rapids, Michigan. Shot on the JVC HD100 with the Brevis 35mm. Any feedback/critiques are very welcome.

http://www.cineverap...conviction.html

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#2 Brian Posslenzny

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Posted 02 October 2007 - 05:14 PM

Whoops, sorry admin. I forgot I already posted this elsewhere on the site yesterday.
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#3 Jonathan Bowerbank

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Posted 02 October 2007 - 07:09 PM

Hey Brian, good stuff. The performances are forgiveable, of course, but I thought it was lit, blocked and shot very nicely.

It's obvious you had fun in doing some noir style lighting. And while some of the shots are stunning visually, perhaps a bit more natural motivation could have taken it to the next level.

The shower scene, for example. I didn't really see where that light would have been coming from. And the hitman's kicker, for when he's tied to the chair seemed a little odd. Perhaps you could have either made it a bit more subtle, or have a bit of light coming through the blacked out windows just so we know where that light might have been coming from.

Otherwise, well done! It's a good demo reel piece for sure!
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