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#1 justinbrown

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Posted 03 October 2007 - 05:46 AM

I shot this film last year on a SR1, with kodak stock, we filmed for a day and a half and had a budget of 500 quid. Let me know what you think.

http://vids.myspace....eoid=2056150719

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#2 Ram Shani

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Posted 04 October 2007 - 06:43 AM

"we filmed for a day and a half and had a budget of 500 quid"

i am sorry but it shows

bad acting
bad script
bad narration

nice cinematography but look like a set not like a location didn't like the choice of lenses

sorry :)
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#3 Robert G Andrews

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Posted 09 October 2007 - 12:54 PM

hmmm... :blink: :unsure: ...therapy?
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#4 Lars Zemskih

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Posted 09 October 2007 - 04:07 PM

In the very first shot I noticed that you can see she is wearing underwear, might want to cut that.
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#5 Dan McCormick

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Posted 25 January 2008 - 12:56 PM

In the very first shot I noticed that you can see she is wearing underwear, might want to cut that.


A girl pointed that out when it was screened at our uni, to which the Director replied "Haven't you ever been f*cked with your knickers on!"

It didn't go down well, but it's funny.
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