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#1 Smaisch

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Posted 12 November 2007 - 10:00 AM

This is a short film we shot this past year on my Canon Gl2. I am looking for some constructive criticism. I sent this in to 4 different festivals, and they all said the same thing. Good story, visually pleasing, but the pacing was waaaay to slow.

So I edited it down from 15 min to 11 min and I think it paces much better.

Any suggestions would rock. We want our next project to be one step better. Baby steps each time. This is our second attempt at a short film.

http://vmix.com/video/1560091/

Steve
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