Posted 07 December 2007 - 07:34 AM
I would love to hear any feedback about how I could improve, as I know it still needs work.
Are there any shots you wouldn't include?
One shot has text over it, as this was included in the final documentary. Should I leave this in the reel, or return to the master tape and use the original footage?
Thanks for your help!
Posted 07 December 2007 - 03:57 PM
Posted 07 December 2007 - 07:33 PM
I appreciate you taking the time to look at my reel and comment. I think you're right about the text - it doesn't really have any relevance to the footage when taken out of context, and detracts from the image a bit.
I had a look at your work as well - you have some nice shots!
Posted 09 December 2007 - 08:05 AM
You have some very nice shots in your reel.
I would defenitely take out the text. This reel is about your work, your images and the text does not make them stronger, in contrary its destracting.
Also I would love to see more of those timelaps shots, those are great.
And auh... this stunt seen really hurts. Specially because you dont expect it at all and it looks very real! How did you do that? That puppet moves very human before the car hits! Maybe you can let the music make a small break when this happens? I think its such a strong image in terms of what happens in it that it feels a bit bizarr for me to see it cut the same way as all the other shots though somebody probably dies in it.
Posted 08 January 2008 - 04:31 AM
Good work Kirsty!