Trailer for the 16mm Feature
Posted 16 January 2008 - 05:37 PM
I wanted to make a slightly unconventional trailer because this is an unconventional movie. It has a story with dialogue, but the story takes thinking to figure out.
Posted 25 January 2008 - 07:20 PM
Posted 25 January 2008 - 09:13 PM
It'd be great if I could get some feedback. From the trailer you can only really see the images but none of the story. Maybe I'll post an actual scene if somebody wants.
Very impressive achievement for someone your age! I liked a lot of the photography, you have some interesting and creative ideas. I think I get the ideas you are working with from the trailer, but it might be more interesting to make the story drive the trailer, if that is what drives the film. If it the film is more inpressionistic, then perhaps tightening up the editing on the trailer might give it more impact. Keep up the good work!
Posted 26 January 2008 - 12:43 AM
Posted 26 January 2008 - 01:22 PM
P.S. the red on the stairs was a strange happening. I used 7218 and 7217 for the interiors. The 7218 made the reds really red while the 7217 was much more natural looking.
Edited by Zamir Merali, 26 January 2008 - 01:23 PM.
Posted 26 January 2008 - 04:35 PM
Posted 27 January 2008 - 01:12 AM