DP Reel updated
Posted 29 April 2008 - 02:47 AM
Posted 29 April 2008 - 04:39 AM
- there's a lot stronger rap material that happens later in the reel, I would rather see only this and take out some of the rap material at the begining
- I guess that above comment applies to the whole reel in general. 5 minutes bordered on too long, I found myself wanting to fast forward at about 3:30. I think you could move some of your flashier stuff to the beginning to give it a stronger start. From what I've experienced I'm much more impressed by what I see in the first 30 seconds and make my impression then, which is hard to turn around 5 minutes into the reel. And don't get me wrong, the reel looks great. Maybe just shortening each piece will help... I know its hard to eliminate good footage! Anyways hopefully those minor comments helped. I'll be happy to PM you with more specifics if you'd like.
Posted 05 May 2008 - 09:21 PM
A bit too long for my taste... but the visuals keep ur attention... so it still works.
I agree with the previous comment tho
U should move your flashier stuff to the beginning to give it a stronger start.
Posted 06 May 2008 - 02:08 PM
In any case, it looks awesome. Good work man.
Posted 06 May 2008 - 06:37 PM