Posted 04 June 2008 - 03:12 PM
I'm new here on this board, this is my first post. What a great group of people on here! What I'm posting is my demo reel from this year, please take a look. I'd love some criticism or ideas people have. This is a rough cut of the reel, so please let me know what ya think.
Posted 04 June 2008 - 06:44 PM
Posted 06 June 2008 - 05:45 AM
Posted 12 June 2008 - 02:45 PM
Also, I don't much care for the shot of the two guys in the dorm room (?). It looks flat and it's boring when compared to the rest of your work.
I thought the inclusion of some dialogue was a nice touch for the most part. I have two suggestions with regards to that. First, I'd start it sooner. It comes out of the blue in the second half. It'd feel more unified if you have at least one snippet of dialogue in the first half, preferably as close to the beginning as possible. Second, I didn't like dialogue with the guy and girl on the bike though. While the words themselves are interesting, their performances are forced. ADR that with better performances or get rid of it.
These suggestions are fairly nit-picky. Overall, very nice work.