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#1 raphaelle gosse

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Posted 18 June 2008 - 07:32 AM

http://www.raphaellegossegardet.com/

This is the last version.The content of this reel was shot exclusively in film. Work done in video will be made available soon. I need some feedback.Please critique it
THank you so much
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#2 Walter Graff

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Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:58 AM

A bit too long for my tastes. Notice some of the shots come from the same piece so some seem to be visual repeats. How about a credit on the web page for the music you use - Title, band, song writer.
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#3 raphaelle gosse

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Posted 19 June 2008 - 09:32 AM

THanks for your advice. i 'll try to cut it down a bit.do you see any shot that are poorly executed or just plain boring? Please let me know, raphaelle
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#4 Jon Rosenbloom

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Posted 22 June 2008 - 03:28 PM

The first 30 seconds strikes me as flat and overlit, and like the "film" got lost somewhere in the transfer or compression. The material from the chateau onwards seems much more accomplished.

Love the song, but is it a bit too familiar?

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