Please comment my work
Posted 01 July 2008 - 01:36 PM
Posted 01 July 2008 - 03:57 PM
You might want to try increasing the contrast of your images. Your shadows aren't very dark and your highlights aren't very bright. A little bit more contrast will drastically improve the quality of your images.
You will probably want to talk to the art department too. I've never seen offices that use chalkboards or have green paint on the walls. (Are you shooting in a school building?) Have them get some poster board of a more office-appropriate color and staple or tape it over the green paint. Go to Kinko's and tell them that you need a poster for a business presentation. Have them make one and then set it on an easel and use that instead of the chalkboard.
There's some fuzzy focus going on in the fourth shot. It's also not level. I don't know if it's taken from the middle of a camera move, but if not, remember to always pull focus and level your camera.
If I were you, I'd invest in 5-10 more china balls and some 500w photoflood bulbs for them and hang those from the ceiling as your key. Use your 2k fresnels as accent lights on the set and the Kinos as fill from near the camera. If they can be, I'd turn on the lights in the back room you see in the fourth shot. If not, that'd be a place to put one of those Fresnels set on flood and aimed at the ceiling. I'd also try to avoid seeing anything below the surface of the tables. The tables don't really look like something you'd see in an office, but if you only see their tops, they'll pass.
Posted 01 July 2008 - 04:12 PM
Posted 02 July 2008 - 08:52 AM
Posted 02 July 2008 - 09:07 AM
It also proves that there was a time before power point!
Edited by Adrian Sierkowski, 02 July 2008 - 09:07 AM.
Posted 02 July 2008 - 12:05 PM
Posted 02 July 2008 - 12:53 PM
Best of luck!