Posted 14 January 2009 - 09:57 AM
Thanks for watching,
Posted 14 January 2009 - 11:54 AM
Really great stuff. Made me want to see more. Best of luck. I hope they bring you on board if it gets picked up.
Posted 14 January 2009 - 01:14 PM
I presume that you already know the good stuff, so I'll just jump straight to what I think could've been improved on.
The editing, seems a bit jumpy and cinematographically in the middle of some good shots there were some shots where you overlit it. The lighting jumped out where it shouldn't, specifically with the lead.
Apart from that it came across really well and that you got the max out of what was provided to you.
Edited by Serge Teulon, 14 January 2009 - 01:14 PM.
Posted 14 January 2009 - 07:19 PM
Posted 15 January 2009 - 08:49 AM
First of all I'm jealous you got film making down one hundred percent. I am amazed at the quality here.
My opinion only though.
Some of the acting is not strong enough to sell this. Although I accept that the characters weakness may actually be an unforeseen strength. However watching this its not apparent.
The trailer is not showing me anything different to what I have seen a million times before. The trailer is not making me ask questions only philosophising on universal thoughts. There is nothing new here. It's not making me want to watch it In fact its doing the opposite. The reason I want to watch though is because Im looking at the amazing high production standards you have achieved and nothing more.. If you have a great script then show it.. Maybe work with the actors. Help them to really live the roles.
Really what you need is great acting high production values at this stage are not so important as showing what the script could be.
Posted 15 January 2009 - 09:14 AM
Thanks so much,