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#1 Batalov Alexander

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Posted 20 January 2009 - 05:44 AM

that's my 1'st work



tech spec's:
Fuji 500T old as **(obscenity removed)**, Dmin = 1.16 (Blue)
Arri BL 3 Camera
Zeiss 2.0*T Lens
Standart def telecine from positive copy which made old school printing method

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#2 Delorme Jean-Marie

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Posted 20 January 2009 - 06:19 AM

hi

textures, lighting and framing looks good

some problems are still anoying :
in the first part the tv set blinking catches the eye, the smoke machine is too much looks like something is burning under the desk. the suit case looks super empty...

in the second part the storm effect isn't really there it's a little like a still camera flashing outdoor.

is it a school essay?

to avoid the fliker on the tv set you need synchro box to sync the opturation with electricity, not shure you can do it with a BL3

the smoke, wait a little and break the "clouds" with a black flag or the slate

the storm effect you need a moonlight on the wall behind the talent to shoow a little more off the room and the striking light have to tuch the walls if not it looks fake

keep filming hang on
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#3 Batalov Alexander

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Posted 20 January 2009 - 07:34 AM

Yes it's my school essay
Master posed the task of creating on the screen effect day and night
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