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#1 Anthony Halloran

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Posted 02 March 2009 - 06:26 PM

A short i shot for my room mate in a lighting class a few months back. Any feedback would be great, thanks.


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#2 Austin Michaels

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Posted 02 March 2009 - 11:16 PM

The lighting i can tell was perfect.

Now for the video. This is a simple mistake but that was exporting it in a bad quality and vimeo takes decently high quality video.

For the part when the guy takes the pills and you see his eyes dilate you should have keep that shot longer or slowed down the eyes getting dilated.

Also when the guy is getting his mug shot you could have added a flash of light when he was side ways. And also when he is facing toward the camera add another flash and have it fade out to the black and white picture.

But besides that very good short film. I just added a little pieces that could help it.
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#3 Anthony Halloran

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Posted 02 March 2009 - 11:23 PM

Thanks for checking out my video, and for the feedback! Also i thought of the flashes director decided not to go with them once he saw them in the edit.
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#4 Austin Michaels

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Posted 04 March 2009 - 07:57 AM

Oh alright but still good video.
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#5 Oleg Kalyan

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Posted 05 March 2009 - 03:34 AM

It's well done, I thought, however, the hard video look kills the essence of dramatic story telling that the piece imply.
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#6 Anthony Halloran

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Posted 05 March 2009 - 11:29 AM

Agreed... i am about to start shooting my next project on two Sony HVR-Z7U and am looking to do everything in my power to achieve some depth of field, and soften shots on talent. Thanks for checking out the video.
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#7 David Chavez

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 09:05 PM

Hey, this is the director of the video. Thanks for the feedback.
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