Looking for some feedback on my last short
Posted 02 March 2009 - 06:26 PM
Posted 02 March 2009 - 11:16 PM
Now for the video. This is a simple mistake but that was exporting it in a bad quality and vimeo takes decently high quality video.
For the part when the guy takes the pills and you see his eyes dilate you should have keep that shot longer or slowed down the eyes getting dilated.
Also when the guy is getting his mug shot you could have added a flash of light when he was side ways. And also when he is facing toward the camera add another flash and have it fade out to the black and white picture.
But besides that very good short film. I just added a little pieces that could help it.
Posted 02 March 2009 - 11:23 PM
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Posted 15 March 2009 - 09:05 PM