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#1 Taylor Erickson

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Posted 30 July 2009 - 01:02 PM

This is my first music video I produced, let me know what you think.

Please be honest, I know there are some problems, rip it apart, I just want to learn so I can improve on the next ones.

Thanks!


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#2 Ram Shani

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Posted 31 July 2009 - 02:29 AM

i think the big problem with your video is that i got bored after 1min:(

it's not interesting story wise

and the cinematography and the lighting is not good to hold the music video


i am sorry but it look like a "wane be " music video

it's very very hard to make a video at low budget and make it look like a 300.000$ music video
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#3 Michael Frymus

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Posted 01 August 2009 - 02:44 PM

i think the big problem with your video is that i got bored after 1min:(


yeah, same here.
and with the rest of what you said.

needs some improvement.
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