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#1 Thomas Chaves

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Posted 16 October 2009 - 11:26 AM

Hi everyone.

I've been a fan of CML for quite sometime and I really enjoy watching eveyone's reels and clips as well as learning how to light and grip. I think this online community is one of the tightest and brightest out there.

Anyway, I recently submitted a screenplay & pitch to an online contest on Massify.com.
The winner of this contest will receive partial funding for his/her film, as well as full access to shoot at the Ace Hotel in NYC. I happened to have a screenplay that was set entirely in a hotel and I entered it into this contest.

If any of you have a few minutes and would be able to review my online video pitch and read my screenplay, it would be greatly appreciated. Also, if you could leave me any feedback, that too would rock.

Below is a link to my video pitch and screenplay. In order to vote and leave feedback, you may have to register on Massify. But if you choose not to leave feedback, I don't think you need to register.

http://massify.com/p.../theroomservice

Cheers.
Thomas Chaves
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