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#1 Thomas Chaves

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Posted 16 October 2009 - 12:21 PM

I recently submitted a screenplay & video pitch to an online contest on Massify.com.
The winner of this contest will receive partial funding for his/her film, as well as full access to shoot at the Ace Hotel in NYC. I happened to have a screenplay that was set entirely in a hotel and I entered it into this contest.

If any of you have a few minutes and would be able to review my online video pitch and read my screenplay, it would be greatly appreciated. Also, if you could leave me any feedback, that too would rock. Once the contest is over, I'm going to tweak it a bit and direct it myself. If any of you have some input, please do share.

Below is a link to my video pitch and screenplay.

http://massify.com/p.../theroomservice

Cheers.
Thomas Chaves
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