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#1 justinbrown

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Posted 26 November 2009 - 04:26 AM

Hi Was wondering if you'd have a look at my ruff cut reel and let me know what you think works, doesnt work, shots that should be taken out and if the music works.
Im looking at cutting about 10 seconds out of the reel


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#2 Edgar Dubrovskiy

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Posted 26 November 2009 - 02:37 PM

Interesting. Very specific tone.

Cut the fist shot - it doesn't show anything, really. Put something very strong - it's the first shot!
And then there are two shots after the 'flare' shot (00:30). Also nothing special.

The rest is really nice. Slow, natural.
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#3 Nicholas A Micros

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Posted 08 December 2009 - 01:05 PM

Interesting. Very specific tone.

Cut the fist shot - it doesn't show anything, really. Put something very strong - it's the first shot!
And then there are two shots after the 'flare' shot (00:30). Also nothing special.

The rest is really nice. Slow, natural.


Exactly.

Great job Edgar, beautiful footage!
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#4 Ram Shani

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Posted 10 December 2009 - 06:47 AM

i love the first shot and i think it should be your opening with the titel of your name on it(insted of the black)

other then that good work:)
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#5 Edgar Dubrovskiy

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Posted 13 December 2009 - 08:03 AM

Exactly.

Great job Edgar, beautiful footage!



ehrm...
It's Justin's showreel :)
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#6 justinbrown

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Posted 13 December 2009 - 05:17 PM

Hey,

Thanks for your comments, i had a lot of comments from all different people, a lot of directors were saying i needed more lit work, thats something i cant add, so will have to work upon that. Also had a lot of conflicting comments so had to go with my guy instinct on the final cut.
Its finished now so thanks,

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