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#1 Alex Wuijts

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Posted 27 February 2010 - 06:35 PM

Hey all,

Here's a commercial I shot for a student/director from the Utrecht School of Arts. It was shot on the Red. I would like to hear your feedback!


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#2 Alex Wuijts

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Posted 28 February 2010 - 05:41 AM

Hey all,

Here's a commercial I shot for a student/director from the Utrecht School of Arts. It was shot on the Red. I would like to hear your feedback!


View on Vimeo

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Does the video playback smoothly?

By the way, the commercial is a school project. It's to support an anti-bullying campaign.
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#3 Satsuki Murashige

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Posted 28 February 2010 - 12:57 PM

I liked it a lot, very well done! Wish I could understand the language, but the mood does come across well.

One thing you may want to change is the thumbnail frame for the video. I don't know if it's something you can actually change without re-editing your video or not, but I'd bet more people would click on the thumbnail if the still frame was of your second shot ("Help" drawn in the sand). It's more descriptive and works better as a title frame.

Keep up the good work.
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#4 Alex Wuijts

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Posted 28 February 2010 - 02:57 PM

I liked it a lot, very well done! Wish I could understand the language, but the mood does come across well.

One thing you may want to change is the thumbnail frame for the video. I don't know if it's something you can actually change without re-editing your video or not, but I'd bet more people would click on the thumbnail if the still frame was of your second shot ("Help" drawn in the sand). It's more descriptive and works better as a title frame.

Keep up the good work.


Hey Satsuki, thanks for the kind reply! I'm still new to vimeo, so I'll look into it.
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