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#1 Haf

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Posted 09 July 2010 - 12:37 AM

Hello,

Some background about me.
Occupation: Software Manager, 13 years of Experience

Making video, motion graphics was an hobby which converted into my passion (from last 1 year). Am learner from the Internet and recently purchased a Canon EOS 550D DSLR to try my hands on making movies. I will be more into post production (visual effects and motion graphics) and plan to start
something soon. I will not be getting into Production but will try to remain at Pre-Production and Post production. Currently am learning. (My website: hafandhalf.com)

I made this video yesterday for my office (script was written by my friend which is attached). Shooting time was 3 hrs and editing was 4 hrs 'coz I had to deliver the video for a contest last night.

So I would request you to please let me know what shots could have been done better and where the editing failed etc. (Please ignore the small visual effects here and there), I want feedback on the Cinematography, camera angles, choice of shots, Editing etc.

No color grading was done, shot on a flatten picture style. Some shots used 50mm lens and some with the 18-55mm kit lens.

Thank you so much for your time.

Video:
http://hafandhalf.sm...8259_ceHRe-A-LB

Tx,
Haf

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