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#1 Shakil

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Posted 23 July 2010 - 04:35 PM

Its my 1st ever documentary. The camera I used in this docu, dont even use that camera before & this was my 1st attempt, just in the morning i got this camera. The main docu was edited in just a laptop with touch pad, no mouse & with no professional editor. I had some limitations thats why i couldnt make the color correction or couldnt do the finishing touch. Its a trailer version. Its a docu 4 a disabilities.
Full Length : 21 minute
Direction : Shakil Hassan
Director of Photography : Shakil Hassan
Trailer Edit : Shakil Hassan

here is my docu link

Edited by Shakil, 23 July 2010 - 04:38 PM.

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#2 Brian Kaufman

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Posted 22 August 2010 - 11:49 AM

Shakil,

This is a very good start. The most important thing is that you picked a subject who is interesting. I was immediately drawn in by the images of this unique person (he writes much more beautiful letters using his mouth than I ever could with my hands!) and that is the most important thing with a documentary. In terms of the image, you have some very moving shots in there. Since this was your first day with the camera, I am guessing you didn't have access to a variable ND filter, but your outdoor scenes were a bit over-exposed. You had another shot showing the bike and cart that was a bit shaky and would have looked best on a tripod.

You framed a lot of very beautiful shots on this preview and throughout the video I was interested, so good job!

Brian
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