Crazy About You
Posted 20 October 2010 - 07:04 PM
( 9 min approx!)
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Posted 21 October 2010 - 12:05 PM
Posted 22 October 2010 - 02:17 PM
PS: Nice trailer BTW.
Robert G Andrews
Posted 04 November 2010 - 10:24 AM
The feeling of the whole thing was quite good. What was wrong with her anyway? Schizophrenia? If so, you must research the symptoms properly first. Remember, there is no such thing as 'crazy'. That is a fact. There are, however, certain illnesses and you and the audience need to know what you are talking about. Also, didn't you say she was "getting worse"? I didn't see that progression. Maybe you need to look at the story and script.
I didn't watch this right until the very end because many camera angles weren't right. e.g. back of head. This was amateurish and here are a few more specific criticisms:
00:30 her facial expression is ambigious rather than troubled or ill. Eye drops may have worked here.
01:04 the counsellor sounded quite sneering, if not sarcastic. She did not act well.
Sarah was fairly convincing though even though the dialogue was dodgy in parts, but I did feel that at 04:33, some of his acting was good and that 05:49 was a chilling moment. Good, but this moment commits him to go upstairs and investigate doesn't it?
Marks: 5/10. Very good in parts, but needs tweaking!
Edited by Robert G Andrews, 04 November 2010 - 10:28 AM.