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#1 Claudio Fusini

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 08:26 AM

Hi everybody,

I'm Claudio and I'm studying at the school of cinema in Milan, Italy (the name of the school is Fondazione Milano). I would like to show you a little work I made (i worked for the photography). It's a short teaser for a film that will be produced in my school in may.

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Please critique my work!

Claudio
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#2 John Young

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 09:58 AM

Well I think its beautiful. I personally think the smoke was moving too fast, but that has nothing to do with your work. I like the colors, I like the muted lighting, I like the feel. The rotoscope work looks very nice, and subtle.

Nice work.
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#3 Claudio Fusini

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 10:09 AM

Thank you a lot John!

For the smoke I didn't know how to control it. Me and the grip tried to put some incense burning inside a small tin but I think there was too much of moving air inside the room. :|
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#4 Bill DiPietra

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 11:28 AM

Very nice texture. What did you shoot on?
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#5 Claudio Fusini

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 02:02 PM

Thanx Bill!

I used a Panasonic HPX-171 with PSTechnik, Zeiss lenses ;)
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