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#1 Elaine Saulnier

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Posted 23 March 2011 - 07:21 AM

Here's my latest project for my cinematography course

Shot on a semi-pro JVC camera, edited with FCP and Color.

All comments, critiques etc welcome :D

-Elaine

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#2 John Young

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Posted 23 March 2011 - 02:10 PM

First please change your screen name according to the forum rules.

The opening shot is very nice. The score suits it perfectly I think.
The 'Walking Outside' sequence seems to be a little muted/pastel color wise. Not sure if that was the intent.
The good thing is that even with the (Vietnamese/Tagalog?) dialogue, of which I didn't understand a world, the
message of the film comes across. I understand what it's about.

The 'Walking Outside' sequence, which I think is suppose to be the memory is a little long for my taste, and I like
long takes. Overall I thought it was nice. The only thing I didn't like was the transition between the opening
sky and the interior rocking char deal. I don't know if it was the movement of the rocking chair, or the color shift.
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#3 Elaine Saulnier

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Posted 23 March 2011 - 06:42 PM

Thanks very much! The language is Thai. If I have time for a re-cut I'll post it up again :D
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