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#1 Paul Tackett

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Posted 28 May 2011 - 06:35 PM

Please critique this short scene. Embed:
<iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/23449003?title=0&amp;byline=0&amp;portrait=0" width="400" height="225" frameborder="0"></iframe><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/23449003">Cinematography Project</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/paultackett">Paul Tackett</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>

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It was shot at night, and meant to look like day.

Please let me know what stands out in a bad way, what I did wrong, what I could have done better, what I could have done differently, what shots did not make sense, shots you would have liked to have seen, etc.

Thank you so much!
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