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The trailer for my New Batman Short Film


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#1 Robert Mojica

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Posted 17 July 2011 - 01:40 PM

Please let me know what you liked and what I can do better. I am always trying to get better and improve my skills. I am the Director of Photography on this project and I need to correct all the errors from this trailer so the final product will be better.

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#2 Ben Syverson

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Posted 17 July 2011 - 11:20 PM

Nice work! You may think about investing in a tripod—the shakiness of most of those shots was distracting to me. And the reveal shot with Batman could have used a little backlight to create some separation. As it is, you have a black costume against a black background.

Keep it up!
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