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#1 James Mansell

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 06:16 PM

I've just finished making a short film, shot on the 5D. I'd really appreciate some feedback, if you have the time that'd be amazing!



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#2 Martin Hong

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Posted 21 August 2011 - 07:43 PM

@3:43 there's a noticeable change of exposure of that shot (under) comparing the previous shots.

And the gun he was holding... I think its a airsoft gun or some kind.. you can clearly see in the close up shot when he points to the other guy. I guess its .44mm ... gotta be careful with that as well.. otherwise is not convincing...
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