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#1 Ian Forbes

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 11:20 AM

Please have a look at the latest music promo I have made-



Thanks!
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#2 Robert G Andrews

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 07:34 PM

It was 'bloody' good and I mean bloody.

Having said that, the first half was better than the last-dunno why-just felt that way.

But visually, she was better than he, because she moved around more and I liked the different colours, lighting and facial expressions associated to her, but he 'didn't do much in a white room', which became boring after a while and his theatrics weren't great either.

I may have liked to see them both jiving to the music, at least at some point.

There shouldn't be anything between her looking cheekily at the camera and turning the dial on the blender. You should cut from one to the next.

There was a little too much reliance on cigarette shots.

And finally, it was too gory (that includes the suggestions). You may not be able to screen it, so why make it that way?
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