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#1 Robert Jensen

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 12:47 AM

Hi all,

My name is Robert and I've just cut my very first reel. I'm just looking for some honest feedback and general thoughts on what you think of my reel. Thanks!

https://www.vimeo.com/40145762
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#2 Michael Raines

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Posted 22 April 2012 - 06:16 PM

The opening shot was off-putting. I think you should open with something stronger. It honestly made me want to stop watching. I think you have some good stuff here and you don't want a bad first impression. I really liked the shots of the boxer.

Edited by Michael Raines, 22 April 2012 - 06:17 PM.

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#3 Chris Millar

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Posted 22 April 2012 - 07:02 PM

Yes, beside the subject which I agree is off-putting you don't to open a reel with aliasing, the impression of a tilted horizon line and drop shadows on your title.
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