Love the end credits- cute!
Technically I'm not a fella but I'm what ya got, so there ya go.
Opening shots are nice colours. I like that bit.
Some nice movement in the shots.
Shots of the awards or whatever are poor. I suggest to you that you could have arranged them however you wanted to get a great shot, and nice framing. There was nothing to stop you doing that, nothing about the location, no performers involved but for some reason you didn't. The close up of the wedding dress is a bit better OTOH.
Well the otherworldly bit is a bit too cream walls and nasty. Seeing as it's supposed to be a bit otherworldly I suppose you could have tried to overexpose it a bit or something to try and play it down, Looks like you tried to filter it a bit. Best of all would have been a different location, especially as theres no reason I can see that it has to be shot in an apartment/apartment corridor!
The bit in the exterior was there and to be honest you could have shot more of it in that exterior. The door could have been a door leading outside without even having to change the dialogue. On the upside using the blind was a good move but you could have used it more to avoid showing the rest of the room. It's a bit too close up too I think and the framing isn't all that. Having said that I really like the shot at 3.17
The other location looks GREAT in comparison. The framing in this location tends to be a lot better too. Maybe it wasn't as cramped in there!
I like the way it cuts to a close up at 1:05 ish. The stuff in the green room is the highlight of the film. That section isn't perfect but it works really well.