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#1 Christopher Eusebio

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Posted 03 October 2012 - 01:56 PM

Hi, I'm new here. I've been a photographer for several years (started when digital didn't exist and I processed my own film!)
I've been shooting some video projects with a MarkII and decided to step it up a few notches and shot a music video.

I was hoping for an honest critique of my first music video. No need to be gentle with the criticism, I just want it to be constructive.

Thanks!


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#2 Bracey Lemons

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 12:51 AM

Not bad a t all. Only thing that had me off guard a bit was that the video couldn't seem to commit between wether they're aware of the camera or not. There were parts were they were aware, but others (the masturbation scene for example) where it felt like they didn't seem to realize there's a camera in their face. Not sure if this was your doing at all, but just threw me off a bit. Visuals were pretty solid though, good lighting for the most part. One moment i didn't like for lighting was when he fell towards the camera and there was a major hot spot on his face (but if their knowledgable of the camera man its fine)
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