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#1 Darrell Ayer

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Posted 11 October 2012 - 11:44 PM

This is one of my first completed projects. Please let me know what you think about the cinematography and what I could have done better.
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#2 Amy Jennings

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Posted 14 October 2012 - 03:51 AM

I cannot say that I have the capacity and knowledge to properly critic your film, so please consider me as a basic "Audience".

Unfortunately it was unable to keep my attention and I became bored.

Perhaps this could be due to the lack of variety of angles during the first few minutes. Also, it took a long time for him just to sit next to her. I think the beginning at least was dragged out a little too much.

I feel that the beginning is the part that is supposed to captivate the viewer and make them wish to continue to watch the film.

Perhaps next time you can use more close ups or even an establishing shot of the place they where at.

But overall it was a good attempt, it is obvious that you are not just filming randomly and you do have an idea on what angles you are using.

Also, please only take this critic for the first few minutes of the film (they order some drink was when I stopped).

Good luck in your future filming!
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#3 Darrell Ayer

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Posted 14 October 2012 - 10:15 AM

Thanks Amy!
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Posted 30 October 2012 - 09:18 AM

Can anyone check this out and see what is most useful for my reel? I'm too close to it to really see what is the best.
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