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#1 C Kenneybrew

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Posted 14 March 2013 - 08:08 PM

Hey all,

 

I directed this ad for a doritos competition (obviously I didnt win) but I would like to know what you think of the quality of the shots and camera, style, etc. And any other advice I could improve on.

 

Thanks

 

 

 


Edited by C Kenneybrew, 14 March 2013 - 08:10 PM.

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#2 Anthony Kennedy

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Posted 14 March 2013 - 10:56 PM

don't start every cut with quick rack focus


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#3 Brian Drysdale

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Posted 15 March 2013 - 03:32 AM

Hey all,

 

I directed this ad for a doritos competition (obviously I didnt win) but I would like to know what you think of the quality of the shots and camera, style, etc. And any other advice I could improve on.

 

Thanks

 

There is a section for critiquing work, this area is for general discussion. It helps in keeping things tidy. Also, you do need to use your full name, it's one of the forum rules.


Edited by Brian Drysdale, 15 March 2013 - 03:34 AM.

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#4 Brian Drysdale

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Posted 15 March 2013 - 04:41 AM

Nor should you double post, since you already had the video in the correct section


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#5 Kevith Mitchell

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 10:10 PM

The only thing I see wrong is the not the shots, but the content.  Its too vague, which adds confusion and the humor is lost. Is the guy suppose to be an animal? : ) 


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#6 Alan Rencher

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 10:38 PM

The lighting is very flat. The focus was off in a couple of shots. I think that the composition could have been more creative. Some of the colors are supersaturated to the point that they clip, and the overall look is very "video".

 

Having said all that, I'm sure you learned a lot from this, and next year's submission will probably be amazing.


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#7 C Kenneybrew

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Posted 04 July 2013 - 12:47 AM

Thank you all!


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