Hello fellows, please critique this short piece of mine. It was shot entirely on GH2 in 6 hours, a shotgun microphone was used to capture the audio but unfortunately it was lost, so audio you hear in the video is actual camera audio with some twists in post. No additional lights were used.
Here is a link to the video
I want to hear everything, how bad is it and how good is it.
Thank you for your time. I appreciate it.