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GO FOR IT. mini-doc which pairs inner city LA kids with notable heroes.

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#1 warner brown

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Posted 16 September 2013 - 04:09 AM

 

Hey guys,

 

I haven't been here in a while, so I'm glad to be back and see this forum is still here and alive.

 

I've been editing a project all summer..I probably won't get paid much at all. But I accepted the challenge because it's for a good cause.

 

This is a rough cut, featuring notable football, boxing stars, musicians and the inner city youth of LA. Ring-led by George Mumford (sports psychologist. Lakers, Bulls, etc)

 

I kindof know what's wrong with this short already.

But I'd love to hear any other perspective. Brutal, honest feedback is painful but I welcome it, since you may spot something I didn't think of, or see. That is priceless. I hope you enjoy, and remember this is a rough cut, be gentle too! (scratch that, be brutal as you need to be)


Edited by warner brown, 16 September 2013 - 04:12 AM.

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